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Ember by cartoongirl7 Ember by cartoongirl7
Materials: Inking pens, Copic Sketch markers


Commission for :icona-fire-within:

I had a lot of fun doing this commission since this type of stuff is totally in my element, and =A-Fire-Within left the character design and pose up to me.
The only request was a turqoise/red/orange/gold color scheme and a phoenix, so I had a blast designing the character with all that artist freedom :la:

I really didn't know how to do fire though, so I kinda just winged it and hoped for the best. I hope it looks alright and that the commissioner will like this end product orz;;
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:iconspiritgoddesstamiko:
This picture, I must say is amazing. I haven't seen anything like it really, which makes it stand out even more. Also not many people can use copics as well as you can. Sometimes you'll see a mark outside the lines but here I do not seen even a speck of that.

I am loving the phoenix completely. You did great on it. One thing I especially like is how you outlined it. You didn't outline it perfectly, you made the fire go out side the lines, which gives it a great effect.

One thing I noticed that was a bit off was the bent leg is a little bit too long. Not drastically but it is longer than the other leg. That is the only mistake I could find in this entire piece.

Fantastic work overall, and keep up with using your copics. They are definitely your strong point. =]
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The designing of the girl is free flowing, especially the sleeves and hem. And the way you were able to embed the patterns and also to swiftly change the colours from turqoise to white at the end of the kimono really marks a perfect touch.

The anatomy's all pretty fair, I think her arms and wrist area are a bit small proportioned to her body, her ankles as well, but the rest looks great!

The hair is perfect to match the pose of the girl. As are the details in the picture, from the bells to the lace-like linings of the sleeves. I love the amount of details in al of your art, this one does seem to lack a bit, but it's still beautiful.

The fire is beautiful for someone who may not be experienced in the field, it looks too solid to be a real fire, and there isn't as much of a flow most fires I see. However, the colours are wonderful and the phoenix still looks beautiful, it almost matches the way the girl is posed.

Overall, colour choice and position of everything is gorgeous and well drawn. The few faults there are are minor and sometimes unnoticable, so brilliant job!
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Kouhei-Ao Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2017  New Deviant Student General Artist
Awesome Love 
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will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in youWARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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Akira9417 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017
This is amazing. 
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Masahiko2003 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2017
I wish I had a good drawing skills just like you. :'(
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guardianarchangel Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
very beautiful and amazing
 I love the kimono and phoenix
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FFDP-Neko Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017
This is so pretty
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mattjohn1992 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Great Art. Awesome. Nice
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mattjohn1992 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Great Art. Awesome Job. Nice.
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BDOG375 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really awesome! Keep up the good work! :D
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Flowery-Cemetery Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2017
SO SUPER CUTE
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Christopher-Hart Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2017  Professional General Artist
Very nice work.
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FantasyRebirth96 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2017
Really great to see this! You've definitely did such a great job on this and I'd like to see more like it^^  
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MiSsOotaKu Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
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MathPotato Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
this is amazing 
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rosewitchcat Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2017
Love 
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Bertille-art Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2017  Hobbyist Filmographer
Mind blowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =O
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EyeOfShadows Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing!  
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Daphne-Brown Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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Masahiko2003 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2017
Lol wut? I ain't gonna trust that. And it isn't scary, get it? If yes, good!
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LOLOLOLOLOL
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NOT HAPPENING!!! =(
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I'm sorry, I don't think you should be repeatedly asking different people to follow you on Instagram across several deviations.
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MiSsOotaKu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
i'm sorry , i just didn't know how to get more followers , that was the only thing that came to my mind 
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erzaaa204 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what I figured. It's okay, I think. Maybe just comment about your Instagram less?
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MiSsOotaKu Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
no i guess i'll just stop, i think that will be annoying to some people 
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No.
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FIERY! Phoenix I love play with fire 
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I love the color scheme, those colors go really well together!! And you did really well with the fire, no worries!!
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absolutely beautiful! ^0^
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Majestic !!!😂
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